One of the students in Room 15 suggested that we use this week to showcase some of students amazing work from their individual blogs.
Lets showcase some fabulous Room 15 bloggers.
Quintin spent a lot of time editing his cross country post. He took a so-so piece of writing and turned it into a personal best!
Ram wrote a fantastic writing sample this term. Read until the end of his story and have a giggle. Twisted endings a speciality of Ram's!
Helen uses some fantastic vocabulary in her writing. Find out more in her story Karma.
Josh W had 100 words to build a story about the night zookeeper.
Commenting is a way we can share our enjoyment of other's work. Be sure to stop by these individual blogs and share some the love!
We are a fabulous class of learners from Tawa Intermediate in Wellington, New Zealand. Our teacher is Stephanie Thompson.
Wednesday 19 June 2013
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ReplyDeleteI think that is a great idea. It can let people know that the work that they did is great and they can take pride in it. it is nice to have someone say that your work is great and can encourage you to do more.
Josh Melville Intermediate School New Zealand