Monday 20 August 2012

This week's work on writing

Do you remember last year when it snowed in Wellington? I found this really cool video of snow in Cuba Mall. You can write about your memory of the snow or you can write about the snow as if you are one of the people in the video.

Your learning intention is to use well-chosen verbs in your post.

e.g Instead of writing, "It snow in Cuba Mall."
You could write the, "Snow fluttered through Cuba Mall."

Be sure to embed the video in your post. You can hit share and then more and you will see the Blogger logo. Click on the blogger logo and a new window pops up for you to write your post.

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